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  1. jumarbye says:

    Whoa! I’m kinda surprised Marcus didn’t….throttle her on the spot. Yikes!

    I have to say that Marcus’s dialogue made him seem more, hmmm what’s the word, intriguing, I think that’s what I want to say.

    Before, he was portrayed as kind of a bratty whiner nephew, but he’s actually got some interesting substance.

    And that was Very Interesting about Erdi’s past in the Blue Castle. I shouldn’t be surprised, I suppose, but. Enlightening. And Marcus chewed her out but good.

    It will be interesting to see if any of your future chapters include a murder. đŸ˜€ Not sure if it will be a double-murder or if one will get to the other first, lol.

  2. Syl says:

    Substance, eh? Yes, you could say that. (evil laugh)

    Didn’t he, though? Marcus was probably taking notes, the last time Ahtar had, uh, a quiet word with him. He’s a quick study.

    Hm?

    Murder you say?

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